What makes a good recount?

Archie and I were showing what makes a good recount.

We were showing people about what makes a good recount.

I found it easy to include my goal for this term because my goal is just that I need to put more effort into my writing

I found it hard to think about what actually makes a good recount but lucky I had a buddy otherwise I would have been lost.

Next time I will think more about what makes a good recount.

• Short but quality.
• Rich paragraphs.
• past tense.
• recent events.
• recrafting of editing.
• written in the correct order.
• Include who, what, when, where, why.
• include see, hear, smell, or feel.
• painting a story in the reader's mind.
• do not include weak words.

My goal for this term is to put more effort into my writing.