Mountain safety poster.

 We were learning about Creating a poster about mountain safety, With the KCC (Kiwi conservation club) book. It's during reading time we need to complete slides and make them very efficient.  

I found it easy to edit the poster and make it look tidy, I don't think I should've been wasting my time on making it look tidy and clean. For substance I would've liked to make it more better on the writing next time. 

I found it hard to make my work look better, while just making it more fancy I could've used my time actually working on it and not wasting my time on little things for the poster.  

Next time I will Make my writing more adjective, and adjust the long sentences into medium sentences.

Persuasive writing (Natural Disasters!)

 We were learning about if it is important to be prepared for a natural disaster. The subject was writing, persuasive writing.  Persuasive writing is something that proves somebody to agree to your point of the subject. It means proving to somebody that your opinion is better than their opinion.

I found it easy to make the paragraph's persuade the reader so the reader can understand when people get trapped in a dangerous natural disaster. Natural disasters are very dangerous in my opinion. You could die being trapped in any of them. That is why it is important to be prepared for a natural disaster.

I found it hard to do the editing because I already had fixed up most of my spelling mistakes while reading through my persuasive writing, listening to read-and write.

Next time I will try harder on my persuading instead of the spelling adjectives because then it might as well be called a adjective writing session. Not that much persuasion in my writing, I don't really think so.